उन्होंने प्यार को मेरे अब आजमाना छोड़ दिया
भरोसा हो गया शायद कि अब ख्वाबों में आना छोड़ दिया
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कैसा करिश्मा है मेरे महबूब का
आग लगाता भी वही बुझाता भी वही
मिलता कैसे आराम उनके चाहने पर भी
कि दर्द भी वही दवा भी वही
कैसे भटक न जाऊं मैं यहाँ पर
कि मंजिल भी वही रास्ता भी वही
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कोई पूछे तो कैसे बताएं की हम क्या काम करते हैं
तुम्हारा नाम लेते हैं तुम ही को याद करते हैं
beautiful and full of emotions…you write very well…don’t underestimate yourself dear. Looking for more 🙂
Thank you for encouragement. This definitely helps 🙂
Hi Priyank,
You’re doing a splendid job, keep up at it. Would be great to hear and read more poetry from you.
“Koi puche to kaise bataye ki hum kya kaam karte hai” hmmm…..symbolic of my plight nowadays. 🙂
Regards
Thank you for the encouragement 🙂 I’m glad that you liked it.
Very nice…looking forward to more
Thank you 🙂
you can’t be a beginner …. u wrote very well and deep..
“कोई पूछे तो कैसे बताएं की हम क्या काम करते हैं
तुम्हारा नाम लेते हैं तुम ही को याद करते हैं”
Boht khoob…!!
keep it up!!
Thank you for liking it 🙂
very well written! kahte hain woh hum to naye hain …is bahane se..
likhte yun hai magar jaise guzar gaye kai zamaane is afsaane mein!
Thank you 🙂
darte hain hum apna hale-dil batane se..
kyunki shayar naye hain bus aashiq purane hain!
kya baat hai! 🙂 by the way…seems ur still upset wth my last comment..that nw adays I dnt see u commentng on my blog..
No, not at all. Actually my broadband speed limit is up, So doing minimal work with 156 kbps. Will resume from January 5. 😦
You words are always encouraging and your support means a lot. I am eagerly waiting to be able to read and write more.
🙂 ok thanks!
woww.. although i dont know what you write on, bu honestly i like the way you write : with Hindi world. it’s look so beautiful.. 🙂
Thank you so much 🙂
very nice shers priyank. i loved the first one especially.
will share it with my dad who loves shayari and does a little bit of it too 🙂
and that was imagesp, not anonymous. 🙂